Wow, great emotion with a very sad tone. a very great job done by you as i can 100 % relate to it, it is a great poem and deserve a 5/5

That was great. I know exactly where you are coming from. I am sorry that had to happen to you, there is no worse feeling in the world. Anyways it had a clear strong message and kept my attention so it deserves a 10/5

This poem expresses the passion of lost love very well

That's a great poem. Very well written, dont worry theres alot of other people. 5/5

Hey thanks for commenting on my poem "hear my call" and i just wanted to let you know that im not going through that with my mom .lol.

"Slowly dieing"
['dying']

This is one of those sad love poems, where the emotions are expressed really well. I could feel the sadness of love. The last verse though, I thought was a little weak. The first two lines were effective, but the last two weren't. It was an overall, good poem.

Excellent poem dear!...it's soo touching n filled with emotions...sad though but well penned...i can really relate to it too...great write!
5/5!=)
xxPoojaxx

Excellent poem, great flow and wording was perfect very sad and heartfelt a lot pain felt in that write, you did a wonderful job expressing your talent ,best wishes to you and your writing ,please keep it up, you are gifted, your friend Tracy dean~ 5/5~