Comments : Bitter Sweet Revenge {Double Ottava Rima}

  • 18 years ago

    by *Wishes do come true*

    Wow your a very good writer!!!! This poem was kind of scaru but i can feel the emotion!!!
    Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love your poetry, each one that i read is so different and unique, and a new style each time! You are very talented my dear. 5/5 =)

    -Te Amo.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    You really got the talent in writting poems like these! thou all your poems are different than the other!

    Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Ur poems r really amazing how you manage to come up with them!

  • 18 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Your poems inspire me to write. But i know i cant write dark poetry as good as you do. You are really good! Carry on.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Oh-wow. This is purely amazing. I love how well it was written and how it flowed amazingly well, and was ever so easy to read, Love. Great Job.

  • Good poem 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Now that was a poem I really enjoyed reading! 5/5 .... very enjoyable;)

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    I give u a 5/5 nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Ah..interesting.
    Now this I have to add to my long lines of favourite poems.
    Youre very talented.
    5/5