by Wasted Fake Smiles Sep 4, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Walking around, aimless, lost in the crowd. |
Wow...this is really good...it has so much emotion in it...i loved it...5/5. |
by emmerz
Congrats on winning the contest! since this is the one you submitted, i thought i should r/r/c on it. well, it was a fantastic piece of writing. there were a few words you probably could have eliminated to make the flow a bit better, but those words added to the dynamics of the poem, so im not quite sure how you would fix that... but it sounds alright to me just the way it is! so, promises kept, you are now on my favorites but not only because i HAD to put you on, but because i truly love your poetry! |
by Angie
All I can say is, WOW! This poem is absolutely amazing! Your rhythm and flow was great. I can relate to this poem so well. I often feel like a ghost, invisible to all. And lately its been happened a lot. Reading this poem really hit home, so thanx a million for posting up this poem! |
by donna
Excellent work, I loved this poem.. It was sad but was such an enjoyable read :] 5/5 xx |
Welcome to my life, I'm only a ghost, |