This sooo beauitful... i never get on here to update my poems so i recently did, and i think you migh tlike a fe of them so take a look , but this is beautoful... keep writeing...
-Marina

Wow, it was so good.
The story and the idea behind it
is just amazing.
Your rhyme's and flow was so
beautiful. I love the whole but ghost's don't cry thing. it was totally amazing.

I loved everything about the poem

GOOD JOB.

Good job, It is written in a beautiful way .. keep it up

This is one of the most touching poem's that I have ever read. I particualy like the second verse;
Welcome to my life, I'm only a ghost,
Not noticed by many, ignored by most.
Often want to break down, and want to die,
Or cry my eyes out, but ghosts don't cry.

I also like the repetition of 'Ghosts don't cry' throughout the poem.
This is a really great poem and the title also gives it an edge. Well done! 5/5 Keep it up!]

Imi
xXx
(I also liked your entry to my competition btw =) )

Excellent poem 5/5

Wow i love it :)
its so well written. i especially love the second verse stanza thingy :).
its amazing.
keep up the good work
xoxo 5/5

That was amazing!!! I like how you fit that Ghost don't cry in it. I hope everything is alright with you!

5/5
-Rachel

I know how you feel... Sometimes it pays to be invisible... and other times I'd give anything for someone to see past what I allow them to.

Someone to finally notice me and understand what I am going through, what I've been through... someone to see me for who I really am.

This poem touched a sore spot in my heart... It's beautiful in so many ways.

Amazing.

~Kristy~

Awe hunnie, you are amazing. I love your writing. And this poem was so emotional.

"Welcome to my life, I'm only a ghost,
Not noticed by many, ignored by most."

I loved those lines, they were so amazing. And the flow in here was very good! Mostly, I'll always comment on flowing mistakes, but this one had no mistakes, great job Darling, you are very talented. =]

-Jenna.

Welcome to my life, I'm only a ghost,
Not noticed by many, ignored by most.

Welcome to my life, a ghost I'll remain,
Many ignore me, many don't know my name.

These four lines are really outstanding.

Perfect flow and originality.

Excellent work, I loved this poem.. It was sad but was such an enjoyable read :] 5/5 xx

All I can say is, WOW! This poem is absolutely amazing! Your rhythm and flow was great. I can relate to this poem so well. I often feel like a ghost, invisible to all. And lately its been happened a lot. Reading this poem really hit home, so thanx a million for posting up this poem!

"Welcome to my life, I'm only a ghost,
Not noticed by many, ignored by most.
Often want to break down, and want to die,
Or cry my eyes out, but ghosts don't cry."

I LOVED to lines to pieces. Beautiful. Emotional and in all a wonderful write. Keep it up!

5/5

--Angie xoxo

Congrats on winning the contest! since this is the one you submitted, i thought i should r/r/c on it. well, it was a fantastic piece of writing. there were a few words you probably could have eliminated to make the flow a bit better, but those words added to the dynamics of the poem, so im not quite sure how you would fix that... but it sounds alright to me just the way it is! so, promises kept, you are now on my favorites but not only because i HAD to put you on, but because i truly love your poetry!

Emily xoxo--

Wow...this is really good...it has so much emotion in it...i loved it...5/5.