Scream {Etheree}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 4, 2006


Scream
Dreamer
Cry to me;
Do not be scared.
Please; scream your heart out,
Let us see you burn, cry,
Let's see your burning soul die.
We are watching your every move -
Passing you by to watch you closely
Not letting you out of our only sight.

Scream as loud as you can my dear dreamer,
Hold on tightly to what you now have;
Now never let go of your dreams.
But - scream as loud as you can,
Listen to your heartbeat;
Hurt yourself dreamer.
Let your heart go,
I dare you,
Dreamer,
Scream.

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The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can
also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Get creative and write an Etheree with
more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count.

Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    WOW. That was amazing! I loved it. You have talent my friend! My oh my!

  • 18 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Amazing!! I kept reading it. Really enjoyed. You got the talent girl. 5/5 definately.

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I absolutely LOVE the last four lines of this poem. There are many different ways to interpret them, although I'm not sure if you meant it that way.

    In fact, the entire second part is amazing. It seems eerily concerned yet dangerously entincing.

    5/5... incredible.

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Brill!! love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I really liked this one. The wording was so descriptive and the structure of the poem, it is a cool style, i might attempt at one =) Good job deary. 5/5 =)

    -Te Amo.