Wowwwww i really liked this poem!!!! Great job!!!!!!!! this is such a cool poem!!!

Well done, so great
as always your poems are great

I liked your usage of the poetry style.... it expresses something more with the format. Beautiful write- I can't wait to se more from you. :)

Your poem was amazing. it showed a lot of emotion and the form and style you wrote it in made it even better. keep up the great work. wow...

That was very good you are a real writer!

I really liked this one. The wording was so descriptive and the structure of the poem, it is a cool style, i might attempt at one =) Good job deary. 5/5 =)

-Te Amo.

Brill!! love it!

I absolutely LOVE the last four lines of this poem. There are many different ways to interpret them, although I'm not sure if you meant it that way.

In fact, the entire second part is amazing. It seems eerily concerned yet dangerously entincing.

5/5... incredible.

Amazing!! I kept reading it. Really enjoyed. You got the talent girl. 5/5 definately.

WOW. That was amazing! I loved it. You have talent my friend! My oh my!