I liked this poem...it was sad but short and simple keep up the good writting

Raining on temporary good in the day,

This is my favorite line, very metaphorical.
The rhythm is a little off, but it still works, and I think this poem deserves better then 3 so I'm giving it a 5.

Hey hunni this is a awsum poem i luv it 5/5 luv leah xx!

I hope you don't really feel like this...if you need to talk message me.
Overall, good poem!