Awwwwwwwww, that was awesome! I dont have words to explain how touching, hearfelt and true your poem was...Im totally speechless!I loved it all and the rhyming worked so amazingly...It really was a wonderful poem, my friend.
I would like to say which lines appealed more to me but i cant find anyone that was better than the rest.Great work, 5/5 of course!
Best wishes and keep writing like that!

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Damn.... wow, that was a great poem.... u are deffinately gettin added to the fav... wow, u have an amazing gift... dnt ever let itgo... i can relate ur poem 100 percent... keep up the great work...

~lisha

This one is fantastic! your best one by far. you're a great poetry writer.

THAT IS SOO GOOD KEEP IT UP FOR REALLLL..........

I love this...very well written. I myself have often felt like this....

Wow that is how im feeling to a T my bf and i just broke up ****tears***** keep up the good work

Oh my gosh....I frikken LOVE this!
Wow...this blew me away...
Flow was flawless throughout the entire poem, emotion and depth scream from behind the words, the opening is such a beautiful powerful opening and from there on it just gets better and better.
I liked the repetition you used in this, it got your point across well.

This is powerful and evokes a sincere feeling
of despair in me

5/5 in my opinion