I really liked it. I can see the fear you could feel when being abaondoned like that. Being by yourself and vulnerable. I'm glad you don't feel so lonly anymore. You're a great writier. really. =P Good stuff. :)

Awesome, lissa!! we share the same feelings almost. i never saw my birth parents fight, but i know from the records that they did.
keep up the awesome work, hun!!
:)
~maggie

I like how u used the features of baby to say how u feel

This is great i love it and im sorry that this happened to u im gonna read more and dont forget u r awesome at this stuff:D

keenan