I think your poem is really sweet and it really sums up the feeling of when you want someone you like so much to kiss you. i know how it feels, so i relate to your poem really well!! i really like it!!!

Wow i really like this poem...its really good. Kepp up the awesome work.

It was really good, I loved it!

Bye.

I liked it. Great work! I can totally relate to it.

Later

Wow, I really like this poem a lot. You put that feeling into words so well =) and that isn't always easy. Great job!

x.xBrokenx.x

Wow thats good so cute.. aww... happiness lol
well bye

Kay so once again no vote sorry anyway so yeah! i llllovvvee thissss one !! keep it up chicky

I rewrote the ending

Aww

His lips are at my ears
And and im going out of my mind
He whispers "I Love You"
for the very first time

i love this!

Narc xxx

Becca,
This is a beautiful poem. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

Great poem! It had a lot of feeling in it. well written! 5/5

marcella