Goodbye

by Wings Of Flames   Sep 5, 2006


++ This is for my horse who's my best friend who may be taken away from me. I'd miss her so I'd give up on everything. comment and rate please++

Don't go shaggy grey,
Don't toss your head from me,
Please never hide in darkness,
It's your face I want to see,

The time it's fallen past me,
Please dont go so soon,
Give me just one lifetime,
Give me just another moon,

Don't go my misty angel,
Not now I need a friend,
Please stay in this embrace,
Each kiss will slowly mend,

Please don't leave me now,
Don't slip through my fingers,
My last of hope in fantasy,
But my heart still ever lingers,

You fall away to someone else,
Who won't love you just the same,
I took my every ounce of care,
But it's me who's still to blame.

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awe, I hope everything worked out with the horse. And this poem really did show how much you care. Very sweet. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Very good. If you hadn't said it was for your horse, I would have thought someone/something else. You referring to her as 'your misty angel' How very awesome. Great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Yeah, it'll be ok Em. Don't worry *hugs* It was an alright poem, but i won't say anything against it coz it was a release of emotion that u desperately needed out and i think for that reason, it was a very nice read. it's all ok *hugs again*
    -love suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by Tamin

    Emma, HELLO.
    It Is TAMIN. I Know YOU From DEAR. EXCELLENT. I like your POETRY. It is TANTALIZING. x)
    Cheerio
    Tamin