Wow
5/5
it was b.e.a.utiful
gorgeous piece.
didnt see you as such a dark being.
good work
~Emma
thanks for the comment!

It had a dark undertone to it. Some good words but sometimes the words felt...a little too much. Some excellent descriptions. It grabbed attention in the beginning and maintained it throughout. Sometimes there was flow problems but hardly noticable. Nice job with the words and imagery.
~Faith-less