Well stepping infront of a bus isnt a secret anymore...lol...good poem sammy

Thought provoking, Loved it. Reminds me of my youth and how glad i am i grew out of it. I turn 35 9/14 which is tomarrow.

You made me want to cry :) that poem touched my heart :D

Tony :) thxs for commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me....love ya :)

Wow this poem was lovely. I really enjoyed reading it and I can relate a lot. I have days like that all the time where that question lingers in my mind and what not. Very nice write.

Its funny but as you read peoples poems you get a feeling for their hopes and dreams and fears and worries. A feel for the good in someone. You show so much empathy for others in your work. I feel I know you and what I see I like.

It really a waste putting your poems here because only a few will wonder past and take a look. I'm glade I was one of them.

Maybe you should consider trying to write a novel or something.

Elisha