That's real deep... My fav. bits are "Life..." and "Death..." Good job!!!

Good poem. I can relate to what your going through. I feel the same way. Life can be difficult. Keep writing.

So powerfull you have talent.. amazing job.. i cant wait to read more. so im adding you to my faves keep it up , and try to smile. i know it may be hard.. but try..

xx

I love it. its great.keep up the good work.5/5.