Life on earth (Resubmitted)

by Amanda   Sep 5, 2006


Short and simple....

Whistling in the wind,
I hear the strangest cry,
I get up out of bed,
and look up to the sky,

Darkness all around me,
shadows everywhere,
Night time is upon us,
it's silent way up there,

Watching shooting stars,
looking at the moon,
Hours flying past,
morning's coming soon,

Dawn breaks the silence,
with the cockerels morning call,
I think how lucky I am,
to be living on earth at all!

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

Sorry, Just in one of those happy moods. Mainly thinking of what I have and how lucky I am to be alive.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Cool poem, it is full of hope!

  • 18 years ago

    by LingeringHope

    Great poem. y are u sorry that ur happy? im not sorry that u are happy or that i read this poem. it's terrific.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Beautiful poem. It was very well written. The rhyming was great and it flowed very nicely. I really enjoyed it. Good Job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    I love this poem! you wrote it so well!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This poem is so great and it is written so nicely, great job and 5/5 from me.