by -Usmi- Sep 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I like you so |
by Cyma Khan
Very nice poem reall shows real feeelings,,, |
Very sweet poem yet again. Quite long, but still got loads of discription throughtout it. Loads and loads of emotian. OIts really great! One tip is punctuation, i think you should of used it much more then you did. It kinda through me off. Still great poem! Keep them up! xx |
Thia poem ia awesome! you're an amazing writer!! 5/5 again |
"The rose you threw |
by Nicole
Exellent poem 5/5. its uplifting in a way. its a beautiful expression. keep writing |