Comments : YOU ARE THE FIRST ONE

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    This is a true poem and happened to me actually......so plz comment and rate this one ...

  • 18 years ago

    by GraCiE

    Oh my god. i cant explain how amazing this poem is. i feel exactly the same about my boyfriend now and it seems you've captured every word, even the ones i couldnt explain myself. well done and keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    VERY beautiful! I loved it! :D Keep up with the great work!

    ~~Spanish

  • 18 years ago

    by Twilight

    Wow. I like it ....A LOT!

  • 18 years ago

    by whitney

    OMG...this poem is such a awsome, and beautiful piece of poetic art its full of emotion and thats what i love the most about poems plzzzz keep writing and i'll keep read and commenting.

  • 18 years ago

    by ray the emo i am

    It was amazing and deep great job keep the excelent work up

  • 18 years ago

    by trublonde

    Omg, i feel the same about one person too! : ) I like the poem alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    That was a very powerful poem. i loved the descriptive words u used and i like how some parts sped up like u were sayin it right off the top of ur head and other parts were more slow like u thought about it before u said it. it was a very good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chrisi-Beth

    Intresting..good thoughts behind in. pretty good end rhyme... some spots dident make all that much sence. But if you like it, hey. It was pretty good... Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    OMG. good thought process. good writing, also. strategy strategy.

  • This is a beautiful poem you shoudl keep up the good work and keep wrotong poetry you are amazing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    It's hard to put down how excellent this poem is and how much I can relate to this lol. I feel this way about a certain somebody. It's a good feeling sometimes but then other times it's not ... confusing, I know. Wonderfulyl worded, 5/5.
    Much love, Emma xox

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Wow, long, excellent poem! There was a lot of emotion in it. I really felt your sorrow/love.

    -AnnMarie

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow. . . that was a long but great poem . . .lots of feelings and so much more keep up the wonderful work
    Oxo Laura Marie

  • 18 years ago

    by NeNe

    Omg!!!
    datz GOOOOOD!!!!
    does dis have a speacial meanin 4 sum 1 !?!

  • 18 years ago

    by priscilla

    This poem is so sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew Guitor

    Another Great one. Good Job Man.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ocean

    You have talent

  • 18 years ago

    by Tornia

    Awsome poem . most def. 5/5
    Your Poem is Amazing
    Tornia
    P.s. Commet mine too plz

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Exellent poem 5/5. its uplifting in a way. its a beautiful expression. keep writing