by -Usmi-
This is a true poem and happened to me actually......so plz comment and rate this one ... |
by GraCiE
Oh my god. i cant explain how amazing this poem is. i feel exactly the same about my boyfriend now and it seems you've captured every word, even the ones i couldnt explain myself. well done and keep it up!! |
VERY beautiful! I loved it! :D Keep up with the great work! |
by Twilight
Wow. I like it ....A LOT! |
by whitney
OMG...this poem is such a awsome, and beautiful piece of poetic art its full of emotion and thats what i love the most about poems plzzzz keep writing and i'll keep read and commenting. |
It was amazing and deep great job keep the excelent work up |
by trublonde
Omg, i feel the same about one person too! : ) I like the poem alot! |
That was a very powerful poem. i loved the descriptive words u used and i like how some parts sped up like u were sayin it right off the top of ur head and other parts were more slow like u thought about it before u said it. it was a very good poem 5/5 |
by Chrisi-Beth
Intresting..good thoughts behind in. pretty good end rhyme... some spots dident make all that much sence. But if you like it, hey. It was pretty good... Keep writing. |
OMG. good thought process. good writing, also. strategy strategy. |
This is a beautiful poem you shoudl keep up the good work and keep wrotong poetry you are amazing!!! |
by Emma Brown
It's hard to put down how excellent this poem is and how much I can relate to this lol. I feel this way about a certain somebody. It's a good feeling sometimes but then other times it's not ... confusing, I know. Wonderfulyl worded, 5/5. |
by AnnMarie
Wow, long, excellent poem! There was a lot of emotion in it. I really felt your sorrow/love. |
by Laura
Wow. . . that was a long but great poem . . .lots of feelings and so much more keep up the wonderful work |
by NeNe
Omg!!! |
by priscilla
This poem is so sweet |
Another Great one. Good Job Man. |
by Ocean
You have talent |
by Tornia
Awsome poem . most def. 5/5 |
by Nicole
Exellent poem 5/5. its uplifting in a way. its a beautiful expression. keep writing |