by braydens1mommy Sep 5, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
People ask, People question, People see what we can't. |
Good poem and totally true! Ive been in that situation lots of times; when it seems that everybody can see it except HIM!!! Anyway keep writing! |
by Nicole
Ur poem rocks. i like it alot. 5/5 keep writing. it reminds me of life alot. |
by Mama
Very good! the typical "we're just friends" dilemma! You explained it so well! |
by Karin
It seems to me like this poems has contradictions, maybe? Like the girl and the boy hate each other but they love each other at the same time? lol I don't know, I'm not good at depicting poetry. Just know I liked this poem! 5/5! |