It seems to me like this poems has contradictions, maybe? Like the girl and the boy hate each other but they love each other at the same time? lol I don't know, I'm not good at depicting poetry. Just know I liked this poem! 5/5!

Very good! the typical "we're just friends" dilemma! You explained it so well!
Also, thanks for your comments on mine. I'm glad you had a friend you trusted and were able to get through your depression! My son's your age now, and happier and more full of life than ever! and Yes....we trust God implicitly!

Ur poem rocks. i like it alot. 5/5 keep writing. it reminds me of life alot.

Good poem and totally true! Ive been in that situation lots of times; when it seems that everybody can see it except HIM!!! Anyway keep writing!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS