Nice poem with a great message in it, you have done a very beautiful job here.

Another great job, 5/5

My favourite.

That poem was so true. i like how ur poems are longer that most but they keep u reading. they never get borign and there is no stanza that doesnt belong. that was a great poem! 5/5

Aww. This reminded me so much of Graduation last year. It's hard to move on after things like that. But it's gunna happen all over again in high school. -sigh-

The flow was great, as was the imagery. The rhymes seemed cliche to me. If you could improve your rhymes, your poems would improve greatly. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha