Forgotten. {Italian Sonnet}.

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Sep 5, 2006


-Forgotten {Italian Sonnet}.-

Forgotten, under the stars late last night!
Alone in the park, where the children play;
And somewhere in between, she was led astray.
Tears stream down her porcelain face so white,
Luminated under the moons silver light.
The wind whispering secrets of your betray,
Such emotions of your love do you display,
For the one whose love once made you feel so right.

A heart so broken - - still beating on with time - -
From your deceitful acts, played out behind her,
With red lipstick, and a picture so sublime;
She rusts the memories of who you once were.
As your mistress gains your hearts devotion,
She dies like a movie star from your crime.

© Jenna Elphick
September 5, 2006.

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Italian Sonnets have 10-11 syllables per line and is composed of an octave (rhyming abbaabba), and a sestet (rhyming cdecde or cdcdcd) or in some variant form, with no closing couplet.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    A heart so broken - - still beating on with time - -
    ((I loved these lines...))

    I really liked this poem... It was strong and you told such a story so well in format. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    She rusts the memories of who you once were.
    As your mistress gains your hearts devotion,
    She dies like a movie star from your crime

    ^ I like those lines, I don't know why. I applaud you for being able to write a sonnet lol.. you're talented. Keep it up and I hope all is well with you!

    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Wow. Ive been trying to write poems with rules dang they are so hard!! So you did such an excellent job.. you really did an awesome job 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Wonderful... i liked it alot.. its hard to follow rules in writing but you did a great job! :D keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bravo, Very well done. I commend you on your style.

    The flow was great.