by Arcane Blondie Sep 5, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The black ceiling gives her no answers, |
**were as GOOD as yours** |
On the verge of tears... Amazing poem, I seriously think you have talent. Every one of your poems is filled with so much emotion and they all flow so well. I'd have to say though, I think this one is my favorite. I wish my poemS were as yours. Keep up the good work!!! --- ooch =) |
by Jenni Marie
WOW that expressed so much pain and emotion, i thought it was very good. 5/5 |
by Gabi
I can't believe how much emotion and realness is in this poem. It makes me want to cry, every word touches me.... |
I fell in love with this poem at the first line! The wording, rhyming, flow, it's all PERFECT! |