Passion {Palindrome}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 5, 2006


-Passion-
We are
Bodies intertwined
Figuratively bound.
Lost time;
Together if
You love I
Bound secretly,
Never found.
-Lost-
Are we
Intertwined bodies
Bound figuratively;
Time lost.
If together
I love you
Secretly bound,
Found never.
-Passion-

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Palindrome- The carefully placed words form the same
sentence, whether it is read forward or backward. For example, 'Mirrored images reflect images
mirrored' which includes a word in the center as a reversal point for the sentence or even the poem.

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Great work with this one. I liked the feelings displayed and depth of the overall poem. Nicely done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I have never attempted a palindrome, but know how difficult they are. You have penned this PERFECTLY with excellent flow, rhythm, truth, selflessness and beautiful descriptions..all rolled into a particularly challenging form!

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow you wrote a palindrome which i really like to write but i cant it is very hard to write for me but you can write such a great poem like this your the secont person i see that write palindrome great job 5 from me

    Geneross

  • 18 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    This poem is something that makes you feel " why cant i write such short but bold poems " Seems so easy but hard to write. And you are good at it. So keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I'm not sure that I like this one as well as the others, but I prefer dark poems, so I'm slightly biased.

    I don't know if you meant for it to be this way, but I like the way the first part is slightly more definitive then the second. (We are/Are we).

    I considered not rating this one, only because I instantly disliked it because it's a love poem. To be fair, I'm going to give it a 5 based on the word choice, writing style, and flow.

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