That was really good! But shouldn't the one line be changed from figuratively bound to frantically? Because it's different and yeah. But great poem, ur a really good writer. Keep it up. 5/5 =)
-Te Amo.

Wow donno what to say! i mean! these types of poem are so hard to write, but you are very good in writting it!

keep it up!

These poems are hard to write, I can tell y ou put a lot of effort into this one. THe first part to me described lovers while the other maybe dream lovers or how a dreamer could picture this. At least with the words are we in the second part.

Wow! that is so cool! by the way u have spelt one word wrong coz u have got figuatly and frantically! 5/5

I'm not sure that I like this one as well as the others, but I prefer dark poems, so I'm slightly biased.

I don't know if you meant for it to be this way, but I like the way the first part is slightly more definitive then the second. (We are/Are we).

I considered not rating this one, only because I instantly disliked it because it's a love poem. To be fair, I'm going to give it a 5 based on the word choice, writing style, and flow.

This poem is something that makes you feel " why cant i write such short but bold poems " Seems so easy but hard to write. And you are good at it. So keep it up.

Wow you wrote a palindrome which i really like to write but i cant it is very hard to write for me but you can write such a great poem like this your the secont person i see that write palindrome great job 5 from me

Geneross

I have never attempted a palindrome, but know how difficult they are. You have penned this PERFECTLY with excellent flow, rhythm, truth, selflessness and beautiful descriptions..all rolled into a particularly challenging form!

Great work with this one. I liked the feelings displayed and depth of the overall poem. Nicely done!