by january friend Sep 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I think of you every time I look at the ring on my hand |
by Minkus
5/5. The ending was probably the strongest part of the poem; it shed light on the fact that you're talking about someone you saw once, fell in love with, and never saw again, and you still think about this person even though you're now married/engaged to someone else--that's what I got from it. A few more specifics, sensory images maybe, about the cabin might help the reader picture a detailed scene; it's a little vague as it is. Even so, good work. |
by krysten
That was great i loved it so much |
This is awesome...great job... |