by eden Sep 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
HAVEN'T REALLY FINISHED THIS POEM BUT WHATEVER!!! |
by The Undoing
I really liked it too. If you wantd to change anything, the only thing I could suggest is more lines, 'cause the rest of them were really good. I liked it alot, good work :). |
by Samantha
This is really good, I think that you should keep it like it is. :) |