Short, well written, and to the point. I thought this poem was well written because a lot of poems talk about how they are angry, mad, p*ssed, etc. But yours just said sad, and that pretty much summed it all up. Anyway, nice job. Kudos

WOW! some awsome feeling in that, try to work on the sylables and stuff so it rhymes betta- just a suggestion :)

-luv KT

great poem i know what ur talkin about well written short but consivive, ( i think that's how it is spelled) lol, but new ways great job

I really felt that. i sometimes feel like that also. very good poem.. well written!!! keep up the good work! 5/5