The Living Nightmare

by TinyDancer46   Sep 6, 2006


Haunting every feeling
Leaving cracks upon my heart
A tremor taking over me
And tearing me apart

The nightmare as I'm dreaming
Killing me each time I wake
A cut that bleeds a little more
With every breath I take

Like chains inside my prison
Or a noose upon my rope
Shredding every wish I've had
By tearing out my hope

The tears behind my smile
And the truth as I pretend
It's pain that I've kept hidden...
It's the death of my best friend

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is so sad. Brought a tear to my eye. Xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Brooke Howard

    You are amazing!!
    I look up to you...neverrrrrr stop writing poems because you are fantastic!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hopelessly Devoted to You

    Hey, awesome poem even tho its sad. I'm very sorry if this is true but ur very talented and u have a wonderful way in expressing ur emotions. This rates like 10 out of 5, excellent work

  • 17 years ago

    by XxLonelyLovexX

    Aww really sad but really good

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I ALWAYS loved your writing! Girl you got talent...it seems so effortless!! Envy will kill many admirers! You should proud of your abilities my dear!!!

    This piece...a REAL thing that many of live through. Something MANY can relate to. The key I believe is to be able to write something that will touch people and you have that!

    AWESOME!!!!! Hope to read something a little newer soon! ;)

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