In The Blackened Water, Widows Weep. {Triolet}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Sep 6, 2006


-In The Blackened Water, Widows Weep.-

In the blackened water, widows weep;
Enticed by lovers shattered lullabies,
Praying to God, their souls to keep.
In the blackened water, widows weep;
Crying - - kiss their eyes and lay them to sleep,
Where bullets were lost in their husbands eyes.
In the blackened water, widows weep;
Enticed by lovers shattered lullabies.

© Jenna Elphick
September 5, 2006.

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Triolet: is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job.. Its not my favorite out of 3 but still good keep it up :)

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nice Triolet again, Jenna. Very dark too just like a dark poem should be. You worded everything perfectly. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow so nicely written, another 5/5 for you.