Excellent as always Melissa. You have a power keg of emotion within this and it's absolutely brilliant. The word use the flow, simply perfection.
Keep it up~Holly

Melissa... What a splendid piece! If I could say what I want to say any better than Diana has, well I would put it here I suppose. You've created a superb piece that tied my heart in knotts and pulled me back in to read it again!!

A beautifully written poem that belies the fact that love can hurt as badly as any physical wound. The pain doesn't often go away, but lingers, haunting the soul. You have captured that essence and pain in a beautiful way.

Your poetry is lovely.
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WOW!! I loved this alot! i cant tell you how good this piece is..im speechless! i just aboslutely love it! all the wording and the descriptions...everything is like perfect! It makes me want to read it again and again Very great write! im glad i read it! 10/5!
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That speaks out loud.

Its very good. If i were to rate it on a scale of 1-10, its a 15!!
Good job :)

Such a lovely write, really expressive and such a nice structure i loved it!

well done
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Beautiful yet again.. You have the most wonderful way with words. Well done. xx

Wow you did an amazing job on this poem you put a lot of effort into it i can tell 5/5 <33

I feel words come easily to you so it's honest and direct. you know what you write and that is good for poetry. 10/10
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