Tim's poem

by Shandra   Sep 6, 2006


This poem has a part of Back at one I know this so dont think im trying to steal it or something. comment and vote plz

The way my heart feels tonight
now that your back my world is right
once before I shoved you out the door
but how I love you even more
I never thought someone could love me so much
to die without my feel and my touch
I guess I was proven wrong
never thought a guy would cry, because of a song
Lean over and give me a kiss
because this song you dont want to miss
"One, its like a dream come true
Two, just want to be with you
Three, Boy its plain to see that your the only one for me and
Four, repeat the steps one through three
Five, make you fall in love with me\"
Now I\'m going to put my heart to the love test
let you to my heart: be my guest
I\'m tired of looking for love
and you were sent from up above
im done standing guard
because this so called thing love is really hard.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lov3 the Lord your God

    I know you were not tryin to steal girl...but of course its good to let everyone know that just in case. Well you did a real noce job you just may have a big future in poetry notthat I know of any but yeah keep up the good work! I really love reading your poems there real and many of the things you talk about reaches me on a deep level. I've gone through things that your poems talk about and that makes it even more real you know. Well yup long but real. :):( 5/5