Im sorry your so sad id want to save you if you ever want 2 talk just e-mail me ok xoxoxo love georgia

Ur poems is cool i know how u feel im the someway even that i dont rite mony like this any more but yar i love it im ging to vote on with to

I am definetly adding you to my favorites!=]

I know how you feel seeing as i felt pain sence i was 8 years........holding in pain makes it worse...im adding you to my favorites..ive written plenty poems like this...hmhm....5/5

Whoa, that's kinda weird...I just submitted a quote thingy with the line "too broken to be fixed" ... but I didn't copy it, I promise! :P but now onto the poem...I enjoyed it all, but I especially liked the ending...it's like the person goes through this whole thought process and then there's one big blow, one final "smack in the face" for the grand finale...or something like that. anyways, it was really good, keep up the good work! oh, and on a grammatical note... "Now know one can see you cry" -- the "know" should be "no", and in the very last line the "too" should be "to". but still, 5/5!

Powerful poem. 5.0

This is a really powerful piece, well done

Exactly what I'm feeling. I love it.