Waves {Lanturne}

by Natalie   Sep 6, 2006


----------Waves,
---------Crashing,
--------Upon shore,
-------Gently drifting,
------------Back.

7th September 2006
Copyright (c) Natalie.

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Lanturne: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow..it makes me wnt to go there....ur really good!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    There's a good picture in this poem, made me think of the seagulls and everything even though you didn't talk about them. Great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Nat, there was only one thing I didn't like in this poem, and that was the word 'upon'. It didn't really fit for me. But it was still a good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Wow! This was such a short poem, but it held so much emotion in it! And it really did put the picture of waves crashing amongst a shore and then slowly working their way back into the water! Kind of made me want to go to the beach as well lol. Keep up the good work Darling. 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Beautiful, though I really tend to be afraid of the ocean, I feel calm by your poem. The soft waves crashing on the rocks: So soothing.

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