by Suri dawn Sep 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I can see that girl sitting under the blossom tree. |
by xxMagioxx
Wow really nice poem there, I can sooooooooo relate, thxs for commenting on my poems ill read your others in a sec :) |
Very powerful and sad. I can notice a broken heart and those wet eyes Telling me something. Keep writing and share your imagination with us. 5/5. |
Excellent poem. I love the repetition in it. It was very powerful and was wonderfully written. 5/5. Great Job! |
by Lutu
Wow! That was amazing...I almost cried in the end...great job! Keep it up! |