Wow! That was amazing...I almost cried in the end...great job! Keep it up!

Excellent poem. I love the repetition in it. It was very powerful and was wonderfully written. 5/5. Great Job!

Very powerful and sad. I can notice a broken heart and those wet eyes Telling me something. Keep writing and share your imagination with us. 5/5.

Wow really nice poem there, I can sooooooooo relate, thxs for commenting on my poems ill read your others in a sec :)

Tony :D love ya :)