WOW absoulutely beautiful. so sad. so much emotion. so........so........ i dnt know what else to say. i'm quiet speechless. WOW. excellent. u have talent. keep writing and i'll keep reading.
love willow xxoo

I really enjoyed this poem a lot but defiantely the other one was porlly more aweosme in my opinin.. i dunno this one just seemed too close to home for me... and yeah it was stlll really good.. i likedthe emotion it made me feel and carried throughout the poem. i thank you for commetning on my poem and i hope to see more from you. i relaly do get some odd kind of comfort from reading your poems.... makes me feel like im not alone

I love this poem its got a great emotionall flow keep it up