by Twisted Heart Sep 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
They're sitting at a football game |
A very enjoyable piece. Your rhythm and wording was great, but what really pushed this piece was the story. So simple, so innocent. I was intrigued. |
The flow was not as good as some of your others I've read, but it was pretty good. A nice, sweet poem. |
by cassanova
I love your poems i write about love too plases read "i wish" and "magical kisses" and tell me what a talented veteran writer like you thinks read some featured too please |
Wow, wow, wow! thats all i can say! that was an amazing poem..... beautifully written! I loved every minute of it! |
by MEMI
Awwwwwwwwwww it isssssssssssssssssssss sooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee comment my poem |