Comments : Because I cant hear

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I have an F.M system at school
    (( I don't understand this part, I won't lie..))

    Otherwise, I'll be nice for once and won't critic your poem like I normally would -- But critic is what makes you a stronger writer.

    With that said, I loved this poem.. It was full of emotion and told a sad story that most just don't see how hard it can be for you. If you ever want a helping hand, I'm here.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Antares

    God what a sad poem. it's probably not quite the same, but people stare at me too. it's my scars. people can be so cruel. stay strong. 5/5