Hey thankyou so much u feel the same for u...And i hope u dont stop writing ever...

It's beautiful! Keep writing! (BTW, Odessy?) Good stuff! :D

I like this poem alot. You show, you don't always have to rhyme to make a poem. So many people think a poem is a story that just rhyms. This one poems is really awsome. KEEP IT UP.
From Your Friend
Aaron