Comments : Tears {Tetractys}

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful poem. Loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is so great natalie, you wrote is so greatly, you are so talanted, keep up the great work like always.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Interesting,
    You have a way with words,
    I've enjoyed reading it...

    God Bless

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is awsome! i love reading poems like these! but i cant write them lol

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    Amazing poem! i loved reading it! I loved how you used those words...really a brilliant piece of work! 5/5
    Keep it Up!
    And
    Keep smiling

    Much Love
    -*-Tormented

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Wow it was very good! n like my other poem it was not what i exoected! but i liked it loads!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, hunny! This was amazing.. It sounded so perfect.. It was as if it had no form at all because of how well it flowed.. The words you chose were so well fitted and the poem was just all over perfection! Loved it sweetie, Ily! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    While I think this poem was beaufitul in a sad way, I know that while tears reveal our confessions and secrets, sometimes people never read them and they fall as tears. Lovely but sad all the same.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl good jb on this one too. good job xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wow u know alot about poetry, there short and meaningful good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    You have wonderful talent. You have the gift of being able to use the perfect words in such a short poem and make it sound amazing. Keep up the great work. Look forward to reading more! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Makes my imagination run wild!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I liked this one a lot as well. And oh my, It was submitted on September 7, and there are already 2267 visits! I think that really goes to show how talented you really are! I really liked the ending line in this one, made me think. Nice job! 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Great descriptive word. Cascading, wow! that one blew me away.

  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    Short but good

  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Another great Cinquain by you! I love all of them...

    And I can relate too...

    Keep it up and I'm here for you...

    Lysette x x