Omg that's an amazing and really touching poem!especially the end is great!keep up the good work!

Wow. What caused you to have this much depression, to have so much description in it is beyond me. I know what you mean with your parents telling you that you never finish anything.

I liked how you described the taste of a bullet, and the steel. Not many people would/could do that. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This was a very strong poem i really loved it wow you are a good writer keep it up and ill keep reading xxx alex xxx