by Clarissa Sep 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The gut in my stomach |
by Sweet lig
Amazing another great wrtten from you,,, very nice and really enjoyed thanks and god bless5/5 |
Ooo I like this. It's short and to the point. I also like the vocab you've chosen. It gives the poem another whole side to it. The ending is strong, and it really leaves the reader thinking. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo |