Tired

by Heather   Sep 7, 2006


I'm Tired,
Tired of being a rock for just any guy to come and kick across the dirty ground
I'm Sick,
Sick of being the girl they come and kick around
I'm Crying,
Crying because whenever i think i love somebody they do me wrong.
I'm Lonely,
Lonely because i feel lower than what I'm really worth, because instead of writing a sad poem, i should be writing a heart-felt love song
A song to the one person who will always take my breath away
To the one that has promised (and really meant) to stay
To stay with me forever, until the day we die
But no, instead i sit here with a tear in my eye, slowly rolling down my cheek
Because the one i loved has moved on and my heart is fragile and weak
Theres a first time for everything i guess
But when will my first time come to really feel loved and to really be blessed

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  • 18 years ago

    by reborn

    Just read it again to rate it, i really like the fact that u say for example:
    "I'm crying
    I'm crying because....."

    It gives a lot of rythm and more passion or feel to the poem. Not sure if that was clear but u can always ask me what i meant. i'll rate it good.

  • 18 years ago

    by reborn

    This one is nice. don't worry u'll find someone perfect 4 u one day, when u won't even be looking or expecting it. try to watch out cuz u seem to get attached to easily and that's why u get hurt cuz most guys are not about commiting

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