This one is nice. don't worry u'll find someone perfect 4 u one day, when u won't even be looking or expecting it. try to watch out cuz u seem to get attached to easily and that's why u get hurt cuz most guys are not about commiting

Just read it again to rate it, i really like the fact that u say for example:
"I'm crying
I'm crying because....."

It gives a lot of rythm and more passion or feel to the poem. Not sure if that was clear but u can always ask me what i meant. i'll rate it good.