The only suggestion I have is: With the first stanza you wrote "A dance in the air" and then for the second & third you wrote "A dance of life" ...you could either change all of them to the second one.. or.. you could change one of the ones in the last two stanza's to something else.. Am I making sense?

Anywho, apart from that, I thought it was a good poem. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Wow, a very great style and a very romantic poem, you have done a great job, 5/5
i really enjoyed it......

AHh...
Thanks for pointing it natalee
It's supposed to be 'love' in the 3rd...
I have missed typing it..
Thanks.

Awsome! thats soo romantic ;)

keep it up!

Very good, i liked your choice of words. And the way you wrote was definately unique. Kepp up the good work! 5/5 =)

-Te Amo.

I like the style and the concept of "free falling at your feet." only question: second stanza "Of a broken hearted..." a broken hearted what? i didn't understand where you were going with that. but that is all!

Wow this is so good.
i like the style
very romantic :)

Hey i like this poem the rhyme is great! very impressive keep it up!

I love how you wrote this. the flow was great.. it felt like I myself was floating in a sweet and soft reverie. Great job!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

This one was great aswell. Wonderful job yet again. I love your poems they are very well written.

Wow i love your idea and the creativity I love how you write and all your wordings great piece again

5 for a filipino lols

Geneross

That was an excellent poem. I really love your style, simple and elegant writing. Your going directly into my favorites.

I LOVED THIS ONE! The emotion and heart you put toward it, was amazing. By far the best I have read from you.. GREAT WORK!

Very Good, i can relate to it pretty well...also thanks for commenting on my poem(=

Jeanette

Aww so beautiful