Omfg.
that was beautifully, tragically, gruesome.
i loved it.
so emotional.
well written.
well flowed.
perfect.
5/5
~Emma

Wowee-- Very dark poem & I loved it! This is how a dark poem should be like, tehe. Very nicely done. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Fuk..this is awesome, it flows so well, i love it!

Wow this is really chilling.. :o))

great write and the selection of words is just amazing.

all the best and take care

Thats so dark and scary... wow
it really gave a good image and i like it,
really clear and awesum

nice !!!

luv sammi x