by Wings Of Flames Sep 7, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The white sheet is open, |
Absolutely amazing. How can someone so young have such a vivid imagination and such a raw talent. I do not know the answer to this. But you have what I was talking about. I love your poetry. 5/5 =] |
A very thought provoking piece. Flow was done well and the imagery coceived was shown in every word. Well done. |
by Lithium
I love the idea u have put forth in this poem, very vivid and intriging great work, and of course you used the word corpse lol lovin it 5/5 xox sam |
Wow, great poem, with a good flow.. |
Oooh, nicely se out ; ) another marvellous piece from my bestest friend : D |