Oooh, nicely se out ; ) another marvellous piece from my bestest friend : D
Talk to you later Em. Love ya!
-Suzie
xox

Wow, great poem, with a good flow..
I like it .. 5/5

I love the idea u have put forth in this poem, very vivid and intriging great work, and of course you used the word corpse lol lovin it 5/5 xox sam

A very thought provoking piece. Flow was done well and the imagery coceived was shown in every word. Well done.

Absolutely amazing. How can someone so young have such a vivid imagination and such a raw talent. I do not know the answer to this. But you have what I was talking about. I love your poetry. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.