Dont notice me

by David   Sep 7, 2006


My pale blue skin lights up around you
My deathly dark eyes become see-through
All these things you do to me
But you dont notice, you want to be free

And I know Im selfish to want you with me
But you dont understand what you mean to me
You are a cornerstone, the beloved queen bee
But you dont notice, you want to be free

And I burn, knowing you are not mine
And I burn, knowing my love is bline*
Youre special, perfect, beloved one
But you dont notice, dont notice me

*should be blind (Poetic licence)

resubmitted coz i left out a stanza whoops %)

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  • 18 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    Yes, This is a very good poem, I have read others that you've written and they are really good too. keep up all the good poetry!!! can't wait to read more!!
    Luvs, DeadGirl