by Kelly Sep 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I sit and i wait for my love to come home. |
by Cathy
This is really sad, its sad to think what women will put up with to satisfy their man. I just think that a person should love you for you and I don't think anyone should go through this type of abuse. But I know how it feels in a way, I went through some things like this and I was blinded and in a way still blinded. But this is strong poem very good with the emotions and the wording you used.5/5 |
by Gem
Woah. |
by steve
So sad yet so true.....i know a coupla girls like this one and theyre not even married....great job |
by *Charisma*
Wow! This is so true, and so sad it happens. Some people are such people pleasers they entirely forget about themselves. Jpoet* |
by N M Lambert
Kelly this is amazing, once again a really well developed sstory. i love how you tell a tale at the same time as evocing such emotions.. really good job. did my dissertation on domestic violence and spent a lot of time in a woman's refuge so can relate to this and you capture the self- blame and erosion of self identity with ease. well done xx |